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Coy Curves - Haiku
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Coy(KOI) Curves Splish, splash round they swim Graceful tail, and agile fin Circle diving spins Pax A 6/7/09 Watercolor painting by me

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Reviews of "Coy Curves - Haiku"

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on June 24, 2009

A fantastic Haiku! Love the element of rhyme. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 11, 2009

I love haiku. This is a fine one, Anita; and the graphic image nicely complements the whole. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on June 11, 2009

Wonderful images, lovely ku.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

cute & clever ....

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

Can tell you're really thriving on your beautiful gift of Art, Anita. Your samples on page have been wonderful and expand and complement your already accomplished artistic gifting. With your natural ease and facility, fluidity with words, it's no surprise to me that you are equally at ease with watercolours and paintbrush! Pen and Paint on! :)) xx

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

So happy you're back! Clever title. Wonderful Ku! Would love to have a print of your painting. You've captured their movement very well. Love the colors. You've noticed that they swim toward each other and then away? A way of keeping up social ties, I suppose, while still respecting individual space. Another lesson from nature...

Lin

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

A beautiful Haiku,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 8, 2009

love it!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 8, 2009

A ku for a koi,really quite charming, A!;-)...ET

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 8, 2009

You captured well the colour and beauty that seem to induce calm and relaxation when watching these wonderful fish in a pond. Sweet/

Hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 8, 2009

I hear KOI make good eatin, maybe I will just take a ride up Jersey and see if i can get a free meal...if I only knew where in up Jersey to drive...I like that great watercolor, did you do it freehand or by the numbers, LOL...& the haiku is really well done too...Ed

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 8, 2009

A great little 'Ku, well done.

Cheers,
Dan

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