At 7 (A Poem For My Daughter) (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

ain't that the truth! i have two daughters and one is five, so i expect to be writing a piece like this to her shortly! my favorite line:

My makeup too, you give a try
And when your thru, you look cockeyed

aiight, i had to laugh out loud when i read this one! nicely done, and definitely heartfelt!

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

So well written, Anita. I remember so well my own daughter declaring a desire to be like me. Ack! Horrors! But, then I said, "Just make sure its only my good parts." You're a great poet, Anita, and obviously a greater mother. ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

lovely poem for the child of the heart...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Anita, you should do a book on these you do childrens writes beautifully. They are always wonderful to read!

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Beautiful poetry for your daughter..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Lovely lovely sentiments, Lady A.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

(((anita)))

absolutely precious, and o, that ending--stellar

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Lovely little poem conveys everything beautifully.
Well done.
Oirdheirc Mor

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

What a blessed little girl to have a Mama like you Lady A! This is Beautiful.

Jack

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

I've had 3 daughters and know well,
Wonderful daughter images written...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Thank you for the wonderful memories, from my own childhood and my daughters. You'r a real sweetheart. She will love this!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

I recall my kids doing the same thing. A very beautiful write

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

This is gorgeous Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

This was wonderful...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

I feel the emotion of deep love woven through this adorable tribute to your daughter.Give her a hug from me.She sounds so sweet.
I loved this!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

isn't seven a wonderful age?? a delightful tribute to your little girl; may you always have a special relationship with her! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :D p.s.: for the longest time, i wanted to keep my character, ronee' le-anne reaux, seven years old, but decided to age her. she is now nearing her 11th birthday; she'll be 11 on christmas day! check out her story, "people say no, but god says yes! (my testimony, by ronee', aged 10 1/2)".

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Lady A~
This is gorgeous and that ending is beautiful

Peggy