Susan, you know I'm a big fan of your work, but this poem speaks of a much bigger story, which I sense you have yet to write. If my take is even close, I believe you’d be doing yourself a favor to take the time to write it, even if you never share it. But then, who am I to say.
Thanks for all you’ve offered in all your postings. I just love your work.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Thanks for all you’ve offered in all your postings. I just love your work.
Dick
In Spirit,
Bear
Incredible despair accompanies the feelings of abandonment for a child.
Blessings,
Christine