A chance to hold you in my arms at last,
A chance we could forget about the past.
Let all our pain and suffering be done-
A chance for you and me to have some fun.
You know how much you’ve come to mean to me
And what I’d give for just the chance to see
If everything I’m dreaming could be true -
The reason why I’m so in love with you.
Although I have to think that chances are
My dream’s too big; my love can’t reach that far,
Could there still be some haunting reason why
No matter what- this dream just will not die?
Why everywhere I look I see your face
And all the cares upon me can’t erase
A single moment we have ever shared,
No other love with this could be compared.
So wonder how a dream as this exists,
And by all trials effortless resists
All powers that would try to stay this dance
Forever in our dreams to find a chance.
"So wonder how a dream as this exists,
And by all trials effortless resists
All powers that would try to stay this dance
Forever in our dreams to find a chance."
When that "Change" materializes (for this might be just a premonition)treasure her! My dad "saw" my mom in a dream ... before he actually met her!
Wow! This poem is very beautiful and full of emotion. It flows so smooth and the read is very much enjoyable. This is a very touching piece too and it seems inspiring to me as well. It is filled with a great deal of love. If it were possible to grade this piece I'd give it an A. Amazing job. You're a really talented poet. Thanks for sharing this poem and please keep on writing.
A lovely and passionate piece of art! I'm seeking excerpts of poetry such as this for a book. I'd be happy to give you an acknowledgement and mention your website if you like.
This is the verse that got to me:
"You know how much you’ve come to mean to me
And what I’d give for just the chance to see
If everything I’m dreaming could be true-
The reason why I’m so in love with you."
and this line too:
"Why everywhere I look I see your face"
Oooooh, yeah.
Why is it every poem you write grabs hold of me? EVERY ONE.
Always good work!
Tami
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And by all trials effortless resists
All powers that would try to stay this dance
Forever in our dreams to find a chance."
When that "Change" materializes (for this might be just a premonition)treasure her! My dad "saw" my mom in a dream ... before he actually met her!
Beautiful dream...beautiful write, John.
Be Blessed!
Lena
all the best,
lena
A lovely and passionate piece of art! I'm seeking excerpts of poetry such as this for a book. I'd be happy to give you an acknowledgement and mention your website if you like.
Either way, I really enjoyed this poem.
Best wishes!
May all your dreams come true!!
Love Tinka
This is beautiful and so heartfelt.
Excellent poetry thank you!!
Peg
Julie :)
This is the verse that got to me:
"You know how much you’ve come to mean to me
And what I’d give for just the chance to see
If everything I’m dreaming could be true-
The reason why I’m so in love with you."
and this line too:
"Why everywhere I look I see your face"
Oooooh, yeah.
Why is it every poem you write grabs hold of me? EVERY ONE.
Always good work!
Tami
Excellent write.
May all your dreams come true..
*Linda*