Happiness and sorrow, a life we share,
emotions running still and ever so deep,
survival comes to those who really care,
those who are not afraid to take the leap.
Our existence captures a moment in time,
it passes quicker than the speed of light,
mystical illusions rooted within the mind,
beauty conceive through heart and sight.
Struggling to stay float in the pouring rain,
forever searching for the courage we lack,
life at times, can be filled with mortal pain,
always moving forward, never looking back.
The world interpreted by one’s own view,
minutes to days, to years, gone in a flash,
yet each moment really does start a new,
attempting to survive without a fatal crash.
Discovering contentment in a gentle wink,
one’s life filled with love and compassion,
the cherished moments are gone in a blink,
strangely concerned about the latest fashion.
Sam... I chose to review this poem because I was intrigued by the title. It is such a true reflection on time and our emotions. I really love your writing style. I look forward to reading more! Amy S
the flow here was exceptional
so were the wording I agree with Ms Taylor
some very strong lines!!!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
Every line a gem, but these are my favorite"
"...Our existence captures a moment in time,
it passes quicker than the speed of light,
mystical illusions rooted within the mind,
beauty conceive through heart and sight..."
Deputy Dave Jenkins investigates the murder of local high school principal, Jerry Egge, but this is a multi-faceted novel that deals with spiritualism, romance, friendship, and children who fall through the cracks.
"Murder isn't usually this
Delightful read, and concur with time's passage in a blink.
Micke
(who also believes that courage is but one step away from fear)
so were the wording I agree with Ms Taylor
some very strong lines!!!
"...Our existence captures a moment in time,
it passes quicker than the speed of light,
mystical illusions rooted within the mind,
beauty conceive through heart and sight..."
Elizabeth