The Art of Writing
Writing is a tedious yet complicated task,
encompassing body and soul,
capturing your spirit in a perceptive mask,
employing words to create a mystic role.
Inscribing the essences of humanity,
besieged in conflict of thought,
absence of restrictive moral vanity,
for the word can not be brought.
Composing is a joyous creative art form,
painting a picture with descriptive words,
a canvas of it's own, never torn,
soaring free with the solitude of the birds.
Unlimited bounds of rhythm and rhyme,
beckoning the darkness as well as the light,
setting the mood of uncertainty in time,
Perpetual wisdom never fading in the night.
Writing expands the horizon of our insight,
from the shadows and depths of our conception,
to the hollows of our own final delight,
expanding the vast realms of reality and perception.
Well, I like the idea, but I think you're holding yourself back. Lots of cliches ("writing expands the horizon of our insight") and melodrama (e.g. "Inscribing the essences of humanity"). And I just plain disagree with the line "Unlimited bounds of rhythm and rhyme" because rhyme and rhythm, while sometimes effective, are often used as self-imposed limitations. I think this poem could benefit from replacing abstractions with concrete imagery. Good poem.
Reviewed by Retardo Culo (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2002
you have been visited by the MaD cLiCkeR. In order to improve your chances for the radio show at AD. Quantity matters!! hehehehe. You are welcome!
Hi Sam, This is great I really enjoyed it! (btw thanks for the nice review of my poem, it was nice of you to take the time...) Have a safe and happy holiday!
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Beautiful Samuel! Beautiful poem we appreciate!
Love, Suzie :-D