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Love Story
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Now for something a bit strange...


 


You often used to tell me that
Your heart was mine forever,
But the longer it sits in the jar
The more it looks like leather.


 


I won it many years ago,
It wasn't very hard,
'Twas not with loving words
But on the turning of a card.


 


I plied you not with poetry
But drugs and alcohol,
Until you slumped, seductively,
Comatose against the wall.


 


I don't think you'd have been aware -
You weren't very smart -
That as you lay there bleeding
I held your warm, still-beating, heart.


 


And now it's mine forever -
You don't need it anymore -
But it's still a comfort knowing
You're still here, beneath the floor.


 


But now it's time for me to go,
Don't wish to be a bore,
Besides, your corpse is smelling
And the police are at the door...


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 Reviews of "Love Story"
Reviewed by Nicole Lasher
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
Cute :)

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
LOL LOL LOL!!! Thankyou !!!....You have indeed saved me from myself this day..NOW I can laugh ..am still doing so...LOL! What a great poem..it's going into my libraray there to await one of my BLUE days...:)..they do pop up now and then...
What a talent! ty

Vesna

Reviewed on October 18, 2003
People do get a bit strange around halloween, don't they? I really like the flow and the rhythm with which this piece reads... kept me going to end... and I love the ending... great write...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
love story? um...what happened to "love means never having to say..." well you didn't really apologize

cute blend of metaphors and turn of the card

thanks,
donna.


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