Ghostly Memory (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

Oooooh. And true too. Good storytelling here. I could see it all.
Nordette

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

At least she was smiling, thank goodness...
What an experience ~Z~

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

Zenith, this is a fascinating tale and very well written. In that situation, I believe I would have reacted just as you did. "Smiles" My philosophy is when dealing with the supernatural, the less you understand the better off you'll be. Thanks, Dolores

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

yikes!...but not yikes...I have had a couple of like experiences, and while startling, there was no real fear...this work of yours is well done...has a wonderful gothic feel to it.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

Excellent tale...loved this much...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

I do love a good ghost story, especially when it was real...check out the following site, may help, may not...

http://southjerseyghostresearch.org/message.htm

Enjoyed this one, ~Z~ Peace thru Knowledge, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

My goodness Zenith...so several of you saw her?
I think you are lucky that you got to see that.
Not many do.....did you stay in that house?
wow...awesome poem...floria

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

I love this tale; and I've seen such apparitions, too. But I'm kind of weird - I look forward to them!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

She could be anyone from the past.. Perhaps your minds were open enough just for that second to see the spirits that do live around us.. Great write. Welcome her..I am sure she is simply watching.

Reviewed by Safi Abdi

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

Zenith, the lady could be a Jinni, the Jinn are known to live among us, though most of us never get to see them, some claim to have had ecounters with them. The Jinn are made from fire. They, too, have a free will.

Interesting experience,
Safi

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

For those who believe in the cross, the laday could be Mary without her son this time. Just a guess. You had no reason to feel scared as the she held a candle in her hand and brought light into your room. Excellent poem.

Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

Makes me rethink my position on not believing in ghosts! Truly eerie, but poetically perfect prose, Z. Good job!

Jules

Reviewed by Rene' Bennett (Reader)

Reviewed on April 20, 2004

This was great! I truly enjoyed this read. Thank you.

Rene'

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 20, 2004

a frightening experience that has a sense of awe in it ...

awesome poem!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 20, 2004

scrary reading it, got goose bumps

thanks zineth!
now I can't sleep ......LOL LOL

William