Turmoil (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 4, 2004

This poem describes so well that feeling of being watched by malign forces, just waiting for you to fall, or get spattered with mud.
Pleasure in other's misfortunes, the Germans have a word for it, schadenfraude, I think. But a sense of humour and faith usually dispel and banish the little gremlins. :-) Chin up, poet, and walk tall! k

Reviewed by Safi Abdi

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

Good job this one!
Safi

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Slap my face, I read it in the 'tone' of the 23rd Psalm. I do know the feeling Z. Happy holidays my friend.

JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on November 22, 2004

Exceptional poetry!

Reviewed by David Arthur Walters

Reviewed on November 17, 2004

You too? My frustrations were once many but now they are one big frustrating blob - expressed as a blog!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 11, 2004

You have done a great job on this. The metaphors are so well-described. Enjoyed this indeed!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on November 1, 2004

Well done, Mizzlady!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 31, 2004

well Penned
Profound

William ....Peace

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

:-)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

What Carmen said! *LOL* No, I won't cop out like that. A solid piece of verse here, Mizzlady.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

Powerful peace of writing. It impacts the emotions. Well done!

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

Powerfully emotive and meaningful. Hits home. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on September 30, 2004

Poet, some days are easier then others, but hopefully, one is fully able to withstand the onslaught that is inevitable, without leaving any long lasting detrimental effects on ones sacred soul. An excellent write.

Reviewed by jude forese