And so it begins...
like an innocent babe, throttled by a familiar face
like the lump of fear , that suffocates a small child
like the lecherous claws, pawing and invading a teen
like cactus confused and foreboding, inflicted in flesh
like a bully , stomping the life out of a weaker opponent
like looking into an oppressed liquid prism...
dulled by infinite madness
like spewing uncontrolled molten lava emotions...
no longer contained by restraints
Here my friend is a glimpse of Hell that has no Fury...
And so it ends...
Your poetry is always SO impassioned!
You blow me away!
BTW, you'll be delighted to know I've added your name to my shortlist of recommended poets on my own AD (and the list IS short, believe me!)
Cheers,
Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA
I enjoyed this piece, continue to write what you know, and where you have been, and your words shall always be unwrapped in power!
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen
like a bully , stomping the life out of a weaker opponent
Candy
ShyPoet1
Bobbi
William
This is a very well writen poem. It paints a good picture and the emotions comes through clearly.
Keep writing.
Glenna
wow..IMPRESSED
Reindeer
excellent--dramatic, compelling, vividly imaged write--well done
hell hath no fury...like karla on a bad day LOL
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Love, JC xoxoxo