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Kerry Compton aka Star Girl

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Caliginous Sea
by Kerry Compton aka Star Girl → (All Poetry by Kerry Compton aka Star Girl)
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Written some time ago...during another lifetime.....

 

Bobbing
Bobbing

Rocking on this
Pitch black sea of angst

Why was I placed here?

Trying to remain calm
In a desolate ocean

No one to save me...

Calm
Calm

Trying not to think
Of the creatures that swim beneath
Waiting to devour me

My heart

My soul

My will to live...

Waiting

Waiting...

What am I to learn
From all of this?

What pearl of wisdom
Am I to take from
This treacherous sea?

Hope

Hope...

Hope is the pearl

It shines vibrant
In the ink black waters

I try to touch it....

But, it is just out of reach...

Rest
Rest...

I breathe deep and try
To relax and build my strength up

To reach for Hope

Tomorrow...

Waiting
Waiting....
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 Reviews of "Caliginous Sea"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 25, 2008
I love this. It is powerful in its simplicity and leaves the reader with hope in the face of despair.
Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on September 5, 2008
A simple but beautiful write.

BRAVO!

GOD has a plan for you!
Your writing is very inspiring.

Blessings,

John Michael
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
Do not be anxious. Waiting for what you can have is the best thing you can do without anxiety. It is sometimes hard, but the sea is forever there and does not end. It is a peaceful thing to me, so find peace in your sould too.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
A powerful, expressive write to which I can relate, Kerry. I appreciate the analogy as well. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
Excellent write - reminded of a sailor on the high seas, crying out "Enough!" - well done -

(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla.
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2008
Tossed on the sea of life storms we all look and reach for the hope of calmer tomorrows. Vivid imagery. Well Done! Deborah
Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 31, 2008
...very well written...something we all reach for...and once found in darkness...hope...to hold on to.
John
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 31, 2008
I like the way you structured your poem, Kerry.
Down, down, down...hope is ever elusive. - Gene.
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 31, 2008
Kerry you did yourself proud with this write for as I read it I couldn't help as an old sailor to imagine real shipwreck survivors being tossed about in the ocean.

Fee
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