Sylence, Good Luck if the rest is anything like this you've got a winner.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
Awesome imagery, Sylence!
Our faults exposed as though we were gowned in cellophane. Thought
provoking...and...
there is an advantage in having someone "paint it black," as
you state in your last line,for then no one else can see our
guilty selves, leaving us alone, inside that void, to contemplate
the changes that must be made, for our own good, and that of others.
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
You came along to paint it black.
- Excellent, passionate, uncontrollable poetry - fantastic! I like!
Greetings.
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~Joseph
Our faults exposed as though we were gowned in cellophane. Thought
provoking...and...
there is an advantage in having someone "paint it black," as
you state in your last line,for then no one else can see our
guilty selves, leaving us alone, inside that void, to contemplate
the changes that must be made, for our own good, and that of others.