Another Day (poem) by Franz L Kessler on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Well, but these are just the pleasant and positive repetitions, though surely boring.
Unfortunately the negative things also happen again and again...
Great poem.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

You write in a most unique way.

Clever, witty, work....ty, Dani

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on April 6, 2004

this is sharply funny....good work, Franz

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

Reality speaks! Heeeheee!

~ May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel ~

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

i enjoyed this a lot! Very well done.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

ugh...yeah..that's it in a nutshell!!!!...hmmm..perhaps next time 'round we can create a less boring scenario..Perhaps!!!!
Enjoyed this ..thanks!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

You paint a portrait of reality and the catch is in realizing how I can relate to a lot of it. Thank you for this offering, Franz. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

lol
bravo!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

Well for sure Franz, one of the things has lost its boredom due to the price increase! (Filling up our gasoline tanks). Wish it would become boring again. Good poem. Bill

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2004

Heh heh heh...great verses...I love the starbucks one
and walmarts the best..but they are all great...
creative writing Franz....floria

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2004

Must be the Starbucks.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on April 1, 2004

Moment to moment we build our day. Sometimes it's exiting, sometimes mundane. Well done.

Carmen

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

Very well crafted and creative Franz!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

This was so creative and uniquely written, I loved this!

Reindeer

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

kOOL WRITE fRANZ
VERY CREATIVE, I LIKE IT

WILLIAM

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

i like how you've arranged these glimpses of daily episode ...

sometimes the mundane will keep you sane ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

Funny stuff, yet sad, too, in our modern, much too harried world.

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

I like the way you capture mundanity here. Maybe it is blah, but it's comfortable blah. It also makes me think repetition isn't such a bad way to live sometimes. But it's up to us to change routine every once in a while. Once done, we can feel better about all that repetition.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

Acurate description of the every day blahs we endure. Need some fun, don't we?

Gina