Star So Bright (poem) by Ann Marquette on AuthorsDen

Star So Bright
by Ann Marquette → (All Poetry by Ann Marquette)
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Dedicated to my Dear Friend Michael… who inspires me to see differently
Oh most beautiful star In the sky tonight You are most bright I watch and wait With hand raised up Open and waiting Slowly, oh so slowly You move through The night sky You come closer As I watch and wait Hand outstretched Then ever so softly You come to rest In the palm of my hand You shine like a diamond Your brilliance Holds me in awe I could almost wish To hold you tight To keep you safe just for me In time, your light Would fade from sight You would die To me and to all So I let you stay As long as you wish With palm open So you may leave at will You will travel back To the night sky To shine brightly For all to see I will cherish The moments you gifted me With your light Specially for me For a little while… Star So Bright Copyright 2005

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 16, 2009

HOW LOVELY ARE YOUR PHRASES AND IMAGERY IN THIS VERY WELL WRITTEN AND COMPOSED WORK. A CLEAR PICTURE OF ONE CHERISHING A LIGHT THAT INSPIRES THEM. BLESSINGS AND THANKS FOR SHARING.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS.

Reviewed by Jo Pelletier (Reader)

Reviewed on December 30, 2008

Loved this piece, thank you...for its touches the heart.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on December 22, 2008

This is a very beautiful and touching tribute to your friend.Its good to know that there are people in this world that appreciates the meaning of friendship and most of all appreciate everything that your friend has mean to you in your life,mentally,emotionally and spiritually.Unfortunately some people would take those things for granted.Thank you for expressing these feelings.take good care of yourself

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on June 2, 2006

Ann
Quite simply beautiful...
Peter

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on May 3, 2006

Plaintive and descriptive........M

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on August 4, 2004

nice write

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on June 12, 2004

An exceptional write and tribute - greatly enjoyed this extra fine prose! Robert.

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on May 29, 2004

Had a friend like this once.

Thanks for the memory Ann,

cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

This is exactly the way I feel about Mademoiselle Esse. How incredible that someone can do that to one's being! This poem deserves five stars (or more if you like). Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you, Ann.

Reviewed by Addie Williams Katie Fairchild

Reviewed on May 6, 2004

Excellent descriptive poetry. Katie

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

A light in my darkened morning. Thank you. Dawn

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Beautiful poetry!
Excellent tribute.

Reviewed by James Daniels

I can actually see that star and want it for myself also, great job

James Daniels

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap

That was a lightning bug. :)

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2004

Every soul can give us a part of their light to share if we are able to see it. Your poem showed me that you understand that- lovely work.