My True Father (poem) by Ann Marquette on AuthorsDen

My True Father
by Ann Marquette → (All Poetry by Ann Marquette)
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(My Happy Father’s Day to HIM)
You loved me Before I was conceived You spoke to my mother As she was about to kill me While still in her womb You loved me And wanted me to live Until time to go Home to you You love me Unconditionally Even when I sin And you forgive me You love me So much You help me through tough times You love me So joyfully You bless me Even though I don’t deserve it The Boy Who planted the seed In the teenage girl’s womb Never became my father The Man Who eventually married her And adopted me as his Did his best to be a good father Neither, the Boy or the Man Would love me As only you have As only you do As only you can Thank you My True Father My Heavenly Father For your unconditional love Your sacrifice for me Your forgiveness Your blessings Dear God Thank YOU for being my FATHER And Happy Father’s Day Copyright June 4, 2008

Reviewed by Susanne Leist

Reviewed on June 4, 2018

Interesting. I never thought of saying Happy Father's Day to God. But then he might also be a mother like Mother Nature. He's all-encompassing.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on January 13, 2017

a poignant, inspiring read

Never Stop Writing!!

m

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Your childlike love for your True Father is heartwarming. He must be filled with joy over it. He doesn't need to read it over again because He knows you and enjoys your mutual love for each other always.
Also one of His kids,
Connie

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 11, 2009

THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL AND WITH A MOST UNIQUE TWIST...A FATHER'S DAY TRIBUTE TO JESUS. WHAT AN ENJOYABLE AND APPRECIATED WORK, THAT IS FILLED WITH THE LOVE THAT ONLY A CHILD COULD FEEL FOR THEIR 'TRUE FATHER'. GOD BLESS AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 17, 2008

A beautiful and divine write
peace be with you

William

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on September 29, 2008

A loving tribute to our Lord GOD! No one compares!
CarolHawks

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Dear Ann,

Beautifully Expressed in Poetic Song!

Growing up, my earthly father was not very nice to me. God, the real father of all of us, took me out of the darkness.

Thank you Jesus!

John Michael

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 12, 2008

A powerful testimonial of your faith; thank you for sharing it, Ann. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on June 8, 2008

Ann, as I read this today, the tears rolled down my cheeks. I must have missed it somehow. When we have God in our hearts, we have all we need to guide us in our lives...without Him we just exist. I'm sure many will be touched by this inspiring writing...I know it touched me.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

oh, Ann, this is so heartfelt and beautiful, brought tears to my eyes.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

A spiritual love reaching out and encompassing your being in an eternal light....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

What a beautiful heartfelt poem.
In times of sorrow, despair, and grief...or sometimes even in times of joy... I can feel His presence in my heart and it helps me feel at peace.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Beautifully heartfelt Ann - like a poetic prayer. And He is the only one who will never leave us or forsake us ... AMEN!
Blessings friend ...