Lead me to
the wetness of you
Along passion's path
that starts with your
fiery kisses
Our tongues teasing
in a dance of lust
my warm breath
behind your ears
as I plant lava
kisses on your neck
on my journey
to the wetness
of you
My strong hands
on your aching breasts
and tonight I
won't be denied
as I take them
into my hungry mouth
Both of us panting
as I kiss your belly
button and spread
your velvet thighs
My eager tongue
licks with delight
the warm sweet wetness
of your womanhood
I bend your luscious
body over the bed
and give you all the
hardness of me
Pumping, and pushing
in and out,
in and out until
we both collapse
in ecstasy as I lay
in your arms
still inside
the wetness of you
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Reviews of "The Wetness Of You (Erotic)"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 12, 2003
Wow. Erotic. I go with Linda - need a cold shower now. Love your style. S.
Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
lol . Ted
This was very very mmmm from beginning to end to the inevitable beginning again (at least for me..)
Gloriously volcanic, yet sensuously caressing like a tropical ocean...
Intensity and gentleness...
What else could this unleash...
...but boiling wetness?... **smile**
Alexandra
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on May 30, 2003
Whew!
I'm next for the cold shower...
Excellent sizzling write!!
~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2003
Darn! Now I have to have another cold shower! Hot write!
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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This was very very mmmm from beginning to end to the inevitable beginning again (at least for me..)
How did I miss this one. This is LAVA
Intensity and gentleness...
What else could this unleash...
...but boiling wetness?... **smile**
Alexandra
I'm next for the cold shower...
Excellent sizzling write!!
~~Linda~~
Nancy
Candida
It is Friday! {smiles}