Private Investigator (poem) by The Gentle Man on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rosalie Gattuso

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

VERY SENSUAL!

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

The other half of her heart will soon beat inside your chest. Somewhere, she's listening. **Smile**

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2003

Hearts are usually hard to find

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2003

Sssssssssssssssssssssss! THIS IS hot. This is very silky. MAN this was tasty to read. The ache and anguish is so subtle but strong.

Thanks,

Teresa

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2003

Oh my Gentle Man such beautiful, passionate, wonderous verse... <sigh>!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 21, 2003

This was beautiful, I really liked this!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 21, 2003

soft and romantic!!
you will find her
and that other
half of your tender heart!!

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on June 21, 2003

Now this is just beautiful...soft and romantic. ~Kerry

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

A beautiful overwhelming feeling I got from reading this.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Top ho poem, see where you're coimg from

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

GentleMan,
This is so special and it can be she is there and you will find her,,.,,
"I continue

to search

for the

other half

of my heart

that beats

beneath

her breast"
Beautiful I use to search too and there he was. All along.
I just needed to open my eyes and look.
Love this tender longing.
Peggy

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

This poem is wonderful!!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Hey, Gentle Man, this is most profound...just like an investigator...I feel this one...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Keep on looking for it-can't be far. Wonderful write.
Love
S

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Perfection!

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Read her your poems when you find her, and she'll be yours for life! Sweet write.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Short and powerful, gentle and direct! excellant!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

beautiful write, gentle man; enjoyed~ in lieu of the question you left at my message board this morning, no, i don't write erotic type stuff; i'll leave that up to you and to labelle...LOL (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Oh this is so precious and loving, I know you will find her and that other half of your tender heart.