At The Office (poem) by The Gentle Man on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

hmmm...your lady is one lucky gal..isn't she?

what can I say?
Excellent write....
everything is just right!..just right!!!

Vesna

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

Super work !!!!

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2003

I need a new job LOL

Excellent write(:
Hugs and happy 4th
Lady G.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 3, 2003

One word "STEAMY"

Good thing my ac is on...lol

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 3, 2003

and no one even noticed that the drapes were not quite closed and the boss was standing there watching the whole episode.
She was fired on the spot.

Sorry I couldn't resist that...wow,what a red hot spunky poem.
Ten out of ten for your fantastic imagination.This is one of the best erotic poems I have read around here.
Best wishes from
kay

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

You bring a whole new meaning to working at the office........hmmm maybe this is why I trained to be a secretary :-) Great write!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on July 1, 2003

I'm clearing the desk off for a fantasy like that to come my way. You've blown my mind again gentle man. :0)

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on July 1, 2003

What company are you working again????
Erotic write my dear. Love it.
Nico

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on July 1, 2003

Wow!! If I'd known I'd read something like this when I returned, I'd have made the time to come back to the den sooner!! Well...as they say, 'better late then never!!'
Great write!
Jenni

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

Whew...cold shower time...:):)
Loved it!!!!!

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

A very vivid fantasy....well done

*Marlene*

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

extrememly hot times at the orifice ;)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

Wow..Hot, nice fantasy,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

yes, what a dream, sir...!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

who needs reality!!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

naughty aren't you....

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

Ummm, this is filled with some intense imagery! I am smiling at Nancy's comment!
What a fantasy indeed!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

Fantasies can be terribly distracting... **smile**

Reviewed by samantha mane (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

hummm, a sensual little trip.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

A warm fantsy indeed! Has me fantasizing a very cold shower.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

With a fantasy like this one, who needs reality at all?

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

See why everyone wants that office job, excellent.

Nancy