Hungry / With Labelle Rouge (poem) by The Gentle Man on AuthorsDen

Hungry / With Labelle Rouge
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Again I want to thank my partner in crime Labelle Rouge for her help with this one....smile
She~ Glimpse your reflection in jade pools shimmering with yearning desire Can you feel the famine? The nearness of you, My Love Your scent so seductive lips inviting, skin enticing I need you, have to have you Wrap me in your arms Cover me in sweet hot kisses Touch all the starving places Fill me with your satisfying love and satiate this aching hunger He~ When you look into my eyes of onyx can you see my desert of desire that longs for the cool refreshing rain of your sweet love? Oh how I hunger for the satin touch of your warm fingertips behind my ears and the feel of them gliding softly across my hairy chest My lips crave your moist midnight kisses, the tantalizing taste of your soothing tongue Hold me tightly and quench me She~ Embrace me in mystic midnight pools How beautiful, dark countenance of my Noble Moorish Othello Your lovelorn Desdemona starves for the heat of bronzed fingers over smooth alabaster hills My woman flesh famished for tongue careses where their ivory smoothness turns to embossed deep rose Devour my sweet fruits of passion He~ Oh my love, how I've tossed and turned, caught in the net of midnight heat as I imagine your warm wet mouth enveloping my bronze hard love muscle, your talented tongue leaving a fiery trail up and down my throbbing shaft Me, lying on my back as you lower your heavenly garden down to my waiting mouth My full lips nibbling and my hot tongue probing the vanilla petals of your orchid Our bodies joined as one, moving to the primal pulsating rhythm of love She~ The taste of my beloved's skin clean, masculine, salty-sweet Your love scent mingles with mine Jasmine, musk, and sweat Surrounds senses, enflames desire Sugar cane tongue caresses I hunger for all of you, My Love tongue tasting pleasing each hard inch Flavor of warm cream still on crimson lips as you cover them with yours Savor satin flesh and enter deeply honeyed nectar covering your sword He~ My Sweet Princess I'm hungry to feel your silky sheath engulf every vein and inch of my hard throbbing manhood as I enter your warm sanctuary from behind My eyes staring at heaven's gates as I plunge in and out of your sweet wetness I slide one finger into your tight honeycomb and bring it to my lips, savoring your sweet nectar, making my nostrils flare as I inhale your delicious scent Oh Baby don't leave me in this abyss Burning to ashes, extinguish me with the cool refreshing water of your love

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

This is what I'd call romantic erotica. Splendidly done

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Wow. This is excellent. Okay, now you tell us how you wrote this-it can't be that you and her were sitting on different computers, just putting this together?
Fantastic.
S

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on July 16, 2003

hot hot hot and creative

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Wow..excellent teamwork...very passionate,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Naughty....but...I like it!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

This poem should've been published in playgirl magazine. Excellent write. :0)

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)