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Apple Pie
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Apple Pie



Up to my eyes in cooking apples.
A bountiful harvest from
a friend’s orchard garden.
Coring and peeling,
(time stealing)
Cut into large chunks,
simmer gently, lightly sweetened.

Mmmm, what an odour
It makes the mouth water!

Up to my elbows in apple pie pastry,
careful to use a very light touch
must keep it nice and flaky.
How many will I make,
a couple of dozen?
Only one for Eric
cos he’s diabetic,
two for Margaret and Reg,
(she gave me some veg.)
and maybe Heidi and Matt,
they would like one or two.
A dozen for the Coffee Morning
to fund our local Air Ambulance.
Got to find room in the freezer too,
to keep Jim supplied, while I’m away!
Oh dear, have I kept one for me?
Roll out the pastry and fit to the dish,
Fill with apple and top with a lid.
Crimp the edges, sugar the tops,
then bake in the oven until
a rich golden brown.

Mmmm, what an odour
It makes the mouth water!

Serve with Devonshire cream
or one scoop (or three!)
of real Cornish ice-cream.
Mmmm. the odour has taste
and its very more-ish.
So what - if it goes to my waist!
Forget about diets and pass me that dish!



Jackie S Brooks ©
3rd September 2003


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 Reviews of "Apple Pie"
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Wonderful!

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Jackie you are truly making me hungry with this description - it almost sounds as yummy as the toffee pudding......no - wait a minute - now I can't make up my mind which sounds better! Guess I'll have to make them both......

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2003
Oh, man!!!!!!!! You're making me so hungry!! This really takes me back. I didn't bake pies often but when I did it was 7-10 at a shot.

~Jackie~

Reviewed on September 4, 2003
Oh sounds tempting...especially as I cannot have it...Yum....Excellent write.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 4, 2003
Cute write!!!

Reviewed on September 3, 2003
Ooh, is my mouth watering or what! Cute write, Jackie!

Jules :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
I wnat to run to the nearest orchard and pick me some fresh apples for pies. See what you did with this epicurean write!Beautifully done Jackie, but you gave me a hunger that won't quit til I have the pie;-)

Reviewed on September 3, 2003
This was wonderful! made my mouth water, apple pie is my favorite!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
wonderful..Floreann

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
LOL! This was very delicious, boy do I feel
like a big fatty. :0)

Reviewed on September 3, 2003
(((jackie)))

pass me a piece of that pie--damn the diet LOL

you've made me very hungry with this delicious, golden write YUMMY

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla.

damn, i'm even smellin' it :)

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
heheheh....great write on my favorite of pies...and I love your ending...damn the diets! This made me laugh and hungry....good job!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
I think I gained a pound just reading this :-) Great write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
Yummy write Jackie...my husband loves apple pie....but not my faforite....I am more for the salty goodies!!

happy baking!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
Here's my address, please send two specal express.

Reviewed on September 3, 2003
like the form, and LOVVVVEEE apple pie! dang it, jackie, now you just went ahead and made me HUNGRY!! *licking her chops furiously at the thought of apple pie!* (((HUGS))) and love, your (hungry) texas friend, karen lynn. :P terrific write, btw!


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