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My Magic Carpet - Part 2
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The continuation...


My Magic Carpet – Part 2

Down Mount Everests snowy flanks
carpet and I made a speedy descent,
Riding the crest of an avalanche
we surfed with excited merriment.

Following rivers through lush foothills
to the home of the Gurkha and Sadhu,
We’ll stay here for a while to explore
the great city of Nepal, Kathmandu.

I’m flying south across India now
looking for the tigers jungle lair,
But in the dappled, leafy shade
to catch sight of him is rare.

Below I see the ruins of palaces,
crumbling, and overgrown by vines,
Inhabited by troops of monkeys
on which a leopard often dines.

An Elephant draped in jewelled silks
raises his trunk to wave at me,
A Maharajah perched upon his back
invites me to his palace for tea.

I will visit a colourful market
to buy fabrics and oriental spices,
Bangles and carved wooden boxes
there is so much here that entices.

Now my tummy is rumbling
woken up by the smell of the spice,
And before I go any further
I’d really love a good curry with rice.

Crossing the vast Indian Ocean
we’ll zip to our next destination,
It is said the great continent of Africa
was the cradle of our civilisation.

On the way we overtook a 707
I gave the pilot a wave and a grin,
Poor fellow fell on his joystick
and the plane went into a spin.

He spiralled down and we followed
until we caught a hold of his tail,
We set him back on his flight path
but it left him looking quite pale.

To be continued…




Jackie S Brooks ©
1 January 2004



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Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2004
Twin Sister of Name,

I am but fully exhausted from the trip thy write dids’t send me upon. Yet, oh but my eyes are filled with delightful images. Thou dost paint more than a pretty picture with thy words.

Joy and great fortune for thee this New Year, sweet Lady.

♫Lady Jaclynn – maid of the poet forest


Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Great fantasy write! Thank you for this. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed on January 6, 2004
This is an excellent piece, humorous and very well done, great write, keep it up...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
That plane went into a spin cos that pilot was watchin you and me walking my beach.....at flying speed.......lol!!

Love you poem Buddy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on January 3, 2004
Wonderful write, thanks for sharing, Jackie! Enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
You just be careful up there, Jackie, you know that there is another Magic Carpet Ride chasing the rainbows and the beautiful people. I believe it is powered by Steppenwolf and has Timothy Leary as a co-pilot, you don't want to get involved with that sort? Or do you? LOL

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
Cute ending. Yes the tiger would be hard to see if he doesn't want to be seen. Wonderful write and looking forward to the next one. Great imagination!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
Lovely lovely ride, Jackie! Can you swing over towards the States and pick me up?

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
Jackie, this ride you are taking us all on is truly delightful! It just illustrates really how HUGE and interesting the world is - many of us would love to hop on a magic carpet and visit or at least SEE some of the world's treasures. Thanks for giving us a sampling - I can't wait for MORE!!!!


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