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Religion
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Hope no-one finds this offensive. it is not meant to be offensive, just offered as a point of view.

Religion

Religion about the days of the week.
Religion about the things we eat.
Religion about the clothes we wear,
About the way we style our hair.
Religion about body parts we cut,
Things we must do; things we must not.
How many hours a day to pray,
Things we must hear; things we must say.
I really don’t think god gives a damn
‘Cept how we treat our fellow man.

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Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
It is wonderful discovering you.
I write about these things..."Fail The Test" "Why Jesus Wept" and my short story "Nightmare."
You are right on in my humble opinion.
John

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 26, 2003
Turn the other cheek..and say more!!

After that I start kicking back!!

Good write Londis!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed on July 26, 2003
(((londis)))

treat others the way you want to be treated...YES YES YES!

thought provoking, well written poem

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed on July 26, 2003
No real person will be insulted when facing the true facts of history.

Very striking poem we read here.

Keep writing, dear Poet, The Inquisition now operates through E-Eye. They don't burn publically anymore, - at least in most part of USA.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2003
Hold nothing back, Londis.. we compromise our expression if we do. To me, you've shown great sensitivity with your ending.. what DO we have, if we don't have our care for each other in the world. It's the only answer to the problems. Well said. katy.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on July 26, 2003
Yes yes yes... I agree with you on this.. It is about our hears .. our souls.. how we treat this earth and the people on it.. Not about eating meat on Friday.
Bravo to you!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on July 26, 2003
I do believe that how we treat our fellow man is at the top of the list. Very good observations about different beliefs of what's important to God...according to individuals interpretations.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on July 26, 2003
really very good write....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on July 26, 2003
It's taking such a long time for mankind to learn to express universal love. How we treat our fellow man is our measuring stick. Love is the master key to our survival. Good points here, Londis!


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