If gravity were turned around We'd all fall up instead of down. If I fell up I'd laugh out loud To bump my head into a cloud. There'd be no skinnrd elbows or knees, Picking up clothes or raking leaves. And planes would need more sky to share For cars would soar into the air. I probably would never cry If I slipped and fell up in the sky. But how would we stay on the ground If gravity was turnd around?
hahahahaha - I really enjoyed this (does that make me a child...at heart ? ::grin::)
Very well done -- as all your writing is. No wonder I've begun 'tracking' you ::chuckle::
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Joni
This is a wise way to introduce science to children. It did prod my imagination.
You Poet, have delivered a good message through the right vehicle.
Thank You for adding value to Poetry treasure.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2003
Awww! This is great and would make our jobs as mothers a piece of cake. Well, with the picking everything up part. Or everything would just be on the ceiling...lol! Loved it!
Thanks,
Teresa Emilie
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2003
LOL made me remember the one time I fell up the stairs and did get skinned!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2003
LOL! True!
A really fun poem Londis...Truly enjoyed....ty, Dani
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2003
Cute poem for children but I enjoyed allot.
Taylor
This second book in Edie's 'Puddle' series is filled with wonderful catchy rhyming poems that have positive nostalgic messages. Her whimsical illustrations carry the poems along on ripples of warm vibrant colours.
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Very well done -- as all your writing is. No wonder I've begun 'tracking' you ::chuckle::
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Joni
You Poet, have delivered a good message through the right vehicle.
Thank You for adding value to Poetry treasure.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Thanks,
Teresa Emilie
A really fun poem Londis...Truly enjoyed....ty, Dani
Taylor
In Spirit,
Bear
lol!!
Love Tinka
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