rhymed poetry is not my speciality, particularly in a language which is not my original one... but Joseph's new poetic form represents such an irresistible challenge! so, here's my humble attempt at "tres linhas" - it may not be very good, but it sure was fun to write! :0)
"Tres Linhas" - three lines that must rhyme in syllables of 5, 6 & 7, respectively. Should also contain imagery that celebrates some sort of connection between nature and spirit.
linhas de amor (love lines) – “tres linhas” form
love written in strands of fate crossing our hands ~ lines not to fade ‘pon time’s sands.
Please accept my deepest gratitude for this wonderful offering to the new form of poetry I birthed called Tres Linhas. Knowing that your creation was achieved by such high effort makes your gift all that more prescious to me.
In love of you and your ever-expanding talent,
Joseph
Well I would say you have done a marvelous job of "tres linhas" and one you should be quite proud of as well as the graphic matches the mood of the lines so well. Great work.
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
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Please accept my deepest gratitude for this wonderful offering to the new form of poetry I birthed called Tres Linhas. Knowing that your creation was achieved by such high effort makes your gift all that more prescious to me.
In love of you and your ever-expanding talent,
Joseph
Beautiful.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love & Light, Jo
Regis
Felix
eT
The whole world loves a trier !
And you have risen to Joseph's Challenge with aplomb and style
Love and Harmony
Peter