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WORDS, LIKE DIAMONDS…
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This short poem is the translated version of my response to a challenge proposed by a fellow Portuguese author, Mónica Correia. The phrase she provided for our inspiration was “I caress words, like diamonds”…
(Incidentally, Mónica’s first published poetry book, “Soundless Bodies”, is being released today – and we (Joseph and I, our good friend Jorge Vicente, and many other fellow poets) will be attending the presentation this evening. Best wishes, dear Mónica!)
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WORDS, LIKE DIAMONDS…


 


I caress those words, like diamonds…
and am not surprised by the hard
glitter
or the chilling shudder – like certain
eyes that fixedly stare, cold and rough – that
they, the words, carve upon my skin.
So, I tear them from my caresses, yes, from
my fingers, and open my hands to let them
fall, the words, as obsolete as jewels
of treasures no longer sought, to the
bottom of nothing. Thus I strip myself
and my caresses of those words, like diamonds…
And I am not surprised that a precious, warm
reverberation, a gem-like splendour glowing
from other fingers, from other eyes, as smooth
as lips – bare of words and simply loving -
suddenly, eloquently, come to adorn me
… of caresses.


 


© 2006 Alexandra* ~ OneLight*®


 


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Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on December 11, 2006
Yes, my love,

Let the words fall like diamonds upon the sands of time and may they be gathered like shells upon the seashore by others who will treasure them as much as we do. This is what poetry is all about ... creating something out of nothing and then letting it fly free to other hearts that can appreciate the gift.

In awe of you,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on December 11, 2006
Dear Alexandra:
Your poem took me back to the sleepless nigths of Vietnam, when one dreamed of a caress touching your face, finger tips drawing with tenderness and warm the contours of a wanted love.
This poem should be inscribed on those diamonds.

Reviewed by Jorge Vicente (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2006
fantastic poem, alexandra. great sensuality. the picture is also great, it's a marvellous complement to the words.

abraços fortes
jorge

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
oh my...this is very very good...powerful imagery and the compositional flow is exceptional.

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on December 8, 2006
In a word: brilliant.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 7, 2006
Great poem. I'm sure your translation does you credit. Victor

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on December 7, 2006
Vivid images woven to create a stunning poem, Alexandra. Excellent, full of beauty and emotion. I enjoyed this.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 7, 2006
I agree with Andy on this one...Stunning is the only way to describe this one Alexandra.

Fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 7, 2006
stunning, the feel of the poem is so perfect..

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 7, 2006
A splendid recitation of what love is all about.

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on December 7, 2006
This is just spectacular! Such sensuality and amazing expression. I can FEEL the words. Your talent always amazes me but this one is exceptional!


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