I caress those words, like diamonds… and am not surprised by the hard glitter or the chilling shudder – like certain eyes that fixedly stare, cold and rough – that they, the words, carve upon my skin. So, I tear them from my caresses, yes, from my fingers, and open my hands to let them fall, the words, as obsolete as jewels of treasures no longer sought, to the bottom of nothing. Thus I strip myself and my caresses of those words, like diamonds… And I am not surprised that a precious, warm reverberation, a gem-like splendour glowing from other fingers, from other eyes, as smooth as lips – bare of words and simply loving - suddenly, eloquently, come to adorn me … of caresses.
Let the words fall like diamonds upon the sands of time and may they be gathered like shells upon the seashore by others who will treasure them as much as we do. This is what poetry is all about ... creating something out of nothing and then letting it fly free to other hearts that can appreciate the gift.
Dear Alexandra:
Your poem took me back to the sleepless nigths of Vietnam, when one dreamed of a caress touching your face, finger tips drawing with tenderness and warm the contours of a wanted love.
This poem should be inscribed on those diamonds.
Reviewed by Jorge Vicente (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2006
fantastic poem, alexandra. great sensuality. the picture is also great, it's a marvellous complement to the words.
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
Let the words fall like diamonds upon the sands of time and may they be gathered like shells upon the seashore by others who will treasure them as much as we do. This is what poetry is all about ... creating something out of nothing and then letting it fly free to other hearts that can appreciate the gift.
In awe of you,
Joseph*
Your poem took me back to the sleepless nigths of Vietnam, when one dreamed of a caress touching your face, finger tips drawing with tenderness and warm the contours of a wanted love.
This poem should be inscribed on those diamonds.
abraços fortes
jorge
Aberjhani
Love,
CJ
Fee