Hi, everybody! Thank you for your support during these last difficult days. Things seem to be improving, now, and I'm hoping to be able to spend some more time with you all and to catch up on readings and comments over the weekend. Meanwhile, lots of {{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}} and love,
Alexandra*
I came to the end of land and reached its beginning in a shudder of moments, static as pauses taken in between steps, not for meditation but of weariness. It rains, in the end of land, a limpidity that is but the one of such beginning, and thus, drains of vestiges each and every inch of skin, of mine, it soaks, until I sit, deliberately drenched, by the edge of memory, with my feet hanging over the void. From here, it is not the return that counts, but rather the new colours of the next flood, and even in the certainty unrefusable of the plunge, I test them with the tips of touch. They don’t even surprise me - I let them, quite simply, penetrate me, in a predominance of yellows, yellows of sun, and of ponds made of yellow sun splashes - and then of greens, dark greens and bright greens and greens almost fading into the spectrum of the blues that, in turn, went to the end of the spectrum of grey boulders rolling like shadows of clouds, and thus reached their beginning of drained sky. Like this one of the end of land in which I let myself fall as if I were rising. And from here I follow, as if I were deriving, with no pauses, along the new ground, fluent - the ground and I - with all the colours of virgin moments and virgin sails.
beautiful colors and imagery
"diliberatly drenched by the edge of memory, with my feet hanging over the void" and "i test them with the tip of touch"
fantastic lines and views!!!
It is always an indeed pleasure to read such fine well written artistic work. I love coming out to my favorite den where you all inspire me so much every day. What I read share and know is such a wonderful view. Stay focused and always write on.
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
fall as if I were rising." <- brilliant, love it!
Yes, meu Amor, the beginning and end are the same point in the Circle of Life, where we can gather "all the colours of virgin moments".
I find this poem to be truly inspiring and I think it is an outstanding literary work. Muitos parabems!
Admiring your artistry,
Joseph
"diliberatly drenched by the edge of memory, with my feet hanging over the void" and "i test them with the tip of touch"
fantastic lines and views!!!
Regis
Fee
I truly love the way you write: you envelope the reader in sheer delight. Beautiful lines, beautiful poetry: yes. Another keeper!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.