A fluid piece, inspired by equally beautiful art. Well done.
Wendi
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2007
Xuxa, meu Amor ...
Your words paint lines of pastel colours that are soft and delicate yet bursting with intense passion that easily and gently penetrate the heart and soul of the reader. This poem certainly leaves one satisfied in the most delightful way.
A beautifully succinct expression of loving unity.
Alexandra ... you are a wonder. It seems that you always immerse your pen into the ink of loving insight, and, in so doing, imbue the hearts and minds of your readers with artistically unique feelings. My heart has been sated.
dear Alexandra, I can't read this without associating its flow and ideas with those similarly conjured by Jude's Catalina... The streams of consciousness seem to flow so much from the same deep and unfathomable source, it seems to me... do take a look and see if you agree! As usual, no-one but NO-ONE can express these deep and "of the soul and spirit" sensings like you... most of us have not the ability to translate the traffic between the mind and spirit in this way, perhaps... let alone articulate it in ways which can be so readily received and understood and in such beautiful form. The lissom beauty and suppleness here is so satisfying. And it is true of you, as it is said in the Bible, that "(s)he who waters others is himself watered". You water our gardens unto Paradise. Thank you and bless you, Kate xx
(from Catalina:
We synchronize our minds and bodies
To swim as a single essence
Drifting over currents of emotion
Daring each other to push our limits
Assisting each delicate stroke
Supporting every awkward effort )
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Wendi
Your words paint lines of pastel colours that are soft and delicate yet bursting with intense passion that easily and gently penetrate the heart and soul of the reader. This poem certainly leaves one satisfied in the most delightful way.
Adoro te,
Teu Joseph
Eileen
Alexandra ... you are a wonder. It seems that you always immerse your pen into the ink of loving insight, and, in so doing, imbue the hearts and minds of your readers with artistically unique feelings. My heart has been sated.
Blessings too you both!
Light and Wisdom ...
(from Catalina:
We synchronize our minds and bodies
To swim as a single essence
Drifting over currents of emotion
Daring each other to push our limits
Assisting each delicate stroke
Supporting every awkward effort )
Georg
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Somethings need no words to quench.