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The precision of a sudden naked rawness
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The precision of a sudden naked rawness

 

For a while I rustled among cogitations
much too verdant, like one more lobed
profile dispersing the succulence of focus
through green, veined ambiguities.


But then, a taste of what it is like to be
penetrated by the consciousness of fruit
fell, like a word, or hunger, on my tongue -
and I, from that specious footstalk, onto
the dampness of earth, with a thud.


Yes, suddenly ripe – certain, in all pulpous
shades of red, of no other purpose than that
of being gathered, now, between your hands
and then your teeth, with the precision of this
naked rawness, by my own avidity.


And… screw the leaves.

 

© 2007 Alexandra* ~ OneLight*®
 


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Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
wow!!!
am stunned!
oh boy..wow!!


Vesna :)

Reviewed by Chase Von
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Love this:) And particularly love the ending:)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Minha Paixão,

You are the consumate Artista Bonita, offering her open heart to the world, the same way that you offer your love to me. All are fortunate who gather your fruit, especially me! :)

Love,
Joseph

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
That last line is superb. Love the picture.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
... Like watching a flower open in the sun and the way that clouds move and form across the sky, this is wonderfully observed and chronicled. Rich, lush and verdant in its tone and imagery, too. Reminds me so much of the acute eye of Virginia Woolf, tying experience and emotion right in at the root of a woman's psyche, like a two-fold umbilical chord. Vivid perceptions here. Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Such beautiful intensity and passion.

Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Alexandra,

Dang. INtensity, passion, perfect word placement: what more do I need? Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
Love the move from density of language to voluptuousness of feeling in these lines. Lives up to the title in a splendid SUDDEN NAKED RAW kind of way.

Aberjhani

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
A most luscious metaphorical offering, Alexandra. Thank you for sharing this gift, the fruit of your talents. Amour et paix de la Colombie-Britannique, Canada,

Régis

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
A satisfying choice of delicious words to delineate the writers precise thoughts. Oh how I admire the poet who mixes the colors and chooses the words to accomplish this. You have taken romantic poetry to another level dear friend, and have done so with extraordinary panache. Also ... your eye for imagery to support your creations is unsurpassed.
Blessings and Light dear and respected friend ...
Richard

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
Absolute master poet.......your last line wrinkled my face.............lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
A ripe fruit, sweet as nectar is to be savored with gusto. Beautiful poem. Victor

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
Oh! to be that albino snake that slithers around the naked body warmth skin, feeling on its belly the vibrations of passion from a quivering flesh.
Raw? it can be too.
Magnificent poem!!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
Captivating work. I loved the last line. Birth to death in life.
Thank you for a wonderful read.
regards,
Chris

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
Natural methaphor captured from the very tree of live. Alexandra I can equate the leaving behind of the comfort of the clinging leaves for the uncertainties but also pleasures of breaking free. Very invigorating write for my mind this morning. Thank you for sharing.

Fee

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
More truth in a raw form of beauty -love { }Ted


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