The precision of a sudden naked rawness
For a while I rustled among cogitations
much too verdant, like one more lobed
profile dispersing the succulence of focus
through green, veined ambiguities.
But then, a taste of what it is like to be
penetrated by the consciousness of fruit
fell, like a word, or hunger, on my tongue -
and I, from that specious footstalk, onto
the dampness of earth, with a thud.
Yes, suddenly ripe – certain, in all pulpous
shades of red, of no other purpose than that
of being gathered, now, between your hands
and then your teeth, with the precision of this
naked rawness, by my own avidity.
And… screw the leaves.
© 2007 Alexandra* ~ OneLight*®
am stunned!
oh boy..wow!!
Vesna :)
You are the consumate Artista Bonita, offering her open heart to the world, the same way that you offer your love to me. All are fortunate who gather your fruit, especially me! :)
Love,
Joseph
Elizabeth
Dang. INtensity, passion, perfect word placement: what more do I need? Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Aberjhani
Régis
Blessings and Light dear and respected friend ...
Richard
Love Tinka
Raw? it can be too.
Magnificent poem!!!!!!
Georg
Thank you for a wonderful read.
regards,
Chris
Fee