His Two Dancers he would see
~ visual poetry of portrait ~
primal body in art form..portal to the soul.
Toes in finest satin, flying time and space,
tap the shoe, curve of the arch, through pain,
~ only beauty shows ~ for these strains of passion.
Arms of grace ~ Art in motion ~
Perceive the music, symmetry of the foot,
demure yet sensual.
Breathe for your heart, Release for your soul.
~ Ballet with Me ~ Courtesy for the Roses ~
(c)copyright10November2010vivianldawson
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Reviews of "If Degas were Here"
Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2011
You have a real gift, Watch a movie, read a novel, such things don't compare with your poems and art in motion, in taking me back to events long ago.
Reviewed by Mike Mirabella (Reader)
Reviewed on May 10, 2011
yes after reading the verse and looking back at the art,I see the how he captured the moment"demure yet sensual"how beautifully put.the words bring a light for some of us to see it both in the art and dance for the first time.
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2011
VIVIAN, HOW BEAUTIFUL YOUR WORDS ARE IN DESCRIBING THE BEAUTY OF THE DANCE ONE OF GRACE AND PRECISION. BLESSINGS, ANNA
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