Never look a horse in the eye...
unless you want your soul revealed.
Un harnessed assertive beauty in motion, head high in dignity,
white the staging of purity, where sand and foam reign in
perfect harmony under a lapis lazuli sky...grasp the magic!
Mane in fluidity...muscles of massive strength... tail of satin
extended in perfect trot with the breaking foaming waves...
reaching out to join the land in magnificent persuasion..
with all the pomp and majesty worthy of a King's procession.
Ode to ride...become one with the horse...explore to procure
the beast within for authentic sanctification of your soul.
(c)copyright13December2010vivianldawson
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Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2011
VIVIAN, ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL AND POWERFUL WRITE. REMINDING US THAT WE ARE IN CHARGE OF THE HORSE...AND NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND.
KEEP GOING MY FRIEND,,,WONDERFUL WORK ANNA
Ode to ride...Become one with the horse.
A beautiful thought, well said. Thank you Vivian, in my minds eye, this is the closest I've ever been with the horse. I rode a horse, on a beach, in the surf, but never one with the animal. The horse was in charge. He took me along the beach, at breakneck speed, then he stopped and I kept going. He was in charge. I led him back to where I had rented him.
Thank you, Vivian, for making me one with the horse. I will remember it now in the way you have presented it.
A Charming poem as the picture is beauty indeed Laura
Reviewed by Mike Mirabella (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2011
to sit and reflect the beauty and majesty of a horse at the end of the day,wonderful!thinking back to my big guy MacKever"mac".a gentle giant a 6 year old hell cat can be set free on with out a worry.how nice to be brought back so vividly to thoughts of the majestic horse.
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KEEP GOING MY FRIEND,,,WONDERFUL WORK ANNA
Cheers,
Dan
A beautiful thought, well said. Thank you Vivian, in my minds eye, this is the closest I've ever been with the horse. I rode a horse, on a beach, in the surf, but never one with the animal. The horse was in charge. He took me along the beach, at breakneck speed, then he stopped and I kept going. He was in charge. I led him back to where I had rented him.
Thank you, Vivian, for making me one with the horse. I will remember it now in the way you have presented it.
Love, Clif
Blessings,
Christine