Divine Panorama (poem) by Vivian L Dawson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2011

This is a timely reminder to all your male readers that a shower isn't necessarily a purely functional piece of equipment.
Vivid imagery packed into an economical little piece.

Reviewed by Joy Hale

Reviewed on July 22, 2011

The setting you portray here is so elegant, complete with candles glowing, scented bath oils, a lover close by to share in the viewing of the "divine panorama of our naked bodies." Sensual bliss!

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 21, 2011

Light the candles and watch them melt!!!

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2011

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN VIVIAN ANOTHER WONDERFUL READ. KEEP GOING MYF FRIEND, ANNA

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on July 19, 2011

Breath of fresh air...sweet aroma fills my senses! LOVE THIS~

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on July 19, 2011

Beautifully written poetry as always a great read Laura

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 18, 2011

LOVELY!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 18, 2011

Sounds like a good place to be in this Heat Wave.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on July 18, 2011

Uplifting and divine poem!
Lavender is just the thing.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 17, 2011

artistically sensuous and a pleasure to read
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 17, 2011

This is sensually delicious!!! Love the photo. Good one, Viv!

Peace, love and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 17, 2011

A sensuous delight, Vivian;
love your language choices here,
especially the use of 'conjoined'

John

Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2011

Aaah! What luxury, what bliss! Just melting in your words, the lavender oil essence poring into my body, refreshing my spirit, mind and body. How can one be so decadent and wholesome and pure at the same time. Ask Lady Vivian.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2011

I dying here from the combination of pain and a pain pill which is making me loopy, but not stopping the pain yet, but I can still tell I have read a damn good poem.

The short, simple poems sometimes are the best, mine today isn't short or simple, so it is a delight to read one which is. That picture is fantastic also. Yep.