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The Moon in Shadows of Me
by Vivian L Dawson → (All Poetry by Vivian L Dawson)
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~Irish Proverb Quote~
"There'll be white blackbirds before
an unwilling woman ties the knot"


Poem Artwork

Looming is the darkness
blowing up a silky wind
solitary in my thoughts of You
I come here a alone
will a storm brew
the rain to wash me clean
of our laden forbidden love

The moon can separate
the clouds from the stars
and control the tides
what can I do

Wallow in the shallow
or swim in the deep end
what will give our love
a life preserver to save
us from drowning

Blackbirds singing in tune
May and June
a love song, just perhaps

a happy ending
before the winter is nigh

and their out of tune

(c) The Moon in Shadows of Me
09September2011 Vivian L Dawson

They slept until the black raven,
the blithe hearted
proclaimed the joy of heaven
- Beowulf -

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Moon in Shadows of Me"
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2011
BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING VIVIAN ANOTHER WONDERFUL PIECE OF WORK FROM YOU...ANNA

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2011
Really atmospheric piece. Good imagery and smooth flow of words.
Be careful of Irish proverbs, they are silver tongued devils, those Irish! "Is fearr Gaeilge bhriste ná Béarla cliste" they say "It is better to have broken Gaelic than fluent English".

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on September 12, 2011
OH my GOsh...this is S T U N N I N G...you my creative poet are brilliant!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on September 12, 2011
a truly heart touching pen.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 11, 2011
Christine says it - so lyrical,
so so lyrical and with your gentle
special touch, Vivian.

John

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on September 11, 2011
VERY BEAUTIFUL, ROMANTIC POEM!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on September 10, 2011
Fascinating poetry as the picture is so magical as always terrific writing Laura

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on September 10, 2011
So lyrical!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 10, 2011
It always amazes me how ravens are so often tied or associated with love or even illicit love. Beautifully done Viv and love that pic.
fee

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2011
When waters treacherous
you tread, beware
rapids forming gentle
but raging into tumultuous
and deep whirlpools . . .

~Irish Proverb Quote~
"There'll be white blackbirds before
an unwilling woman ties the knot"

I spied upon my return
a most strange sight indeed
an albino blackbird . . .


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