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Black noir no more
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Hidden vortex in whirling wind
through seamless transitions
cynical attitudes and sexual
motivations can become
inclusive in morphing
phenomenon of noir illusions
emerging so very midnight black

Thus that of an ebbing tide
rushing out to sea be of
trading a damaging wind
to cleanse a cold cold heart
when ones beating waves run
up to cloudless skies of blue

Forever taking the brass
ring of a circling carousel of
moons rotating magnetic orbit
attracting new beginnings in
gravity of peace and happiness
repelling black noir trappings
along ones stepping stones

(c) Black noir no more
15November2011
Vivian L. Dawson

 


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 Reviews of "Black noir no more"
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2011
A tightly packed piece indeed. I like tales of redemption and fresh beginnings and this certainly fits the bill. Demands close examination too. Well done.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
There is much to reflect upon and to garner in these verses, Vivian. Well done! Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
A whirlwind of emotions, truly beautiful poetry!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
' Rushing out to sea be of trading a damaging wind to cleanse a cold cold heart when ones beating waves run up to cloudless skies of blue'------------ VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on November 17, 2011
Out of the pitch black past and leaving the illusions behind; in to a new awareness. Very intelligently written and captivating poem.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 17, 2011
Tightly phrased poignant writing, Vivian.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on November 17, 2011
Fabulous poem, Vivian. I know you to be an attractive woman who also appreciates "attracting new beginnings." Love the wording and phrasing of this offering; a job well done!

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 17, 2011
FREEDOM!...IN A RICH, UNIQUE POETICAL SHARING WITH PHRASES AND IMAGERY THAT SUPPORT THE THEME SOLIDLY. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WELL DONE WORK. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on November 16, 2011
So beautifully written as always great poetry Laura

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2011
Great writing! I read this three times. Your use of metaphors and word choices overwhelmed my senses. This is truly, in my opinion, one of your very, very best.


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