In the scheme of things
who are we so minute
to laugh, cry, love, play
in a universe so vast
time means nothing
of One to sink or swim
But within to traverse
one day at a time in
awareness retrospect
of mind altering waves
with a tuck and roll out
surmounting that crest
overcoming a drowning
Prevail the scheme of things
secure exalting beaches
One being our Own in Universe
(c) Ushered within Grains of Time
13January2012
Vivian L Dawson
At times, we all live in our own universe, fearing to leave this warm nest to test unchartered waters. Sometimes we need a nudge as your poem so clearly illustrates. Well written.
You give us much to think about and embrace Vivian.
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2012
may each day bring yet another in a series of "surmounting that crest" crescendos for you my dear Vivian... thank you for yet another in an increasing sequence of illuminating poems blossoming forth from an evocative and insightful 'pen'... from one "I" being "our Own in Universe" to another... IOU... (will repay with my next poem)...
Peace,
Roger
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2012
That "tuck and roll out" line is an inspired description of waves hitting the shore. The vastness of the universe theme has been explored many times but this has a pretty original slant.
When you really look at the grand scheme of things, we are but a droplet in time. We must live life to the fullest, don't wait for tomorrow, tomorrow may never come....
A grand observation of the scheme of thins, Vivian, and an indepth treatment of what exactly we ought to do about it. You are right on with each layer you uncovered.
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
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Joy L. Hale
who are we so minute
So very, very true.
Peace,
Roger
Peace, love and light,
Amber
:)Janna