Message for a Bottle (poem) by Vivian L Dawson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 18, 2012

There must be fifty ways to leave your lover.......or nemesis. I think your bottle came back to you. Patrick

Reviewed by Cindy Schaffer (Reader)

Reviewed on April 18, 2012

Beautifully Written, As You Always Do. Love, Peace, Joy, Happiness, Lots Of Laughter, And Most Of All, ~ God's Blessings, To Shower You And ALL Your Family,

Today And Everyday, ~~~~~

Cindy E. H. Schaffer :)

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on April 10, 2012

So freeing and beautifully written!
Onward, away with darkness. I identify with and admire this poem!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on April 9, 2012

Garlands of heart imagine the dolphins at play.
A wonderful poem Lady Vivian.
Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 9, 2012

Casting away our anguish - sounds marvelous.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on April 8, 2012

Always a dream-like situation to be the receiver of such a message and respond in kind. Beautiful sentiments expressed.

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)

Reviewed on April 8, 2012

If only it were that easy to cast away our troubles. I'm sure most folks like the idea of a message in a bottle, the infinite possibilities that come with the act offset by the remote chance that anyone will find the message. You have handled this theme really well, it makes a good read.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 8, 2012

I have received your message from the bottle cast in a far-off shore and read it. Now, I have a clear understanding of you.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 7, 2012

A fine "message" well-shared, Vivian; also I love the imagery as well as the lovely image that you have chosen to represent your theme. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on April 7, 2012

the poet with wings
yearning imagining moving beyond
earth boundaries
we all have to sail somewhere to
be us

an excellent poem, Vivian

john

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on April 7, 2012

Vivian,
A wonderful piece.
Budd

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 7, 2012

Leave the wine as well in the bottle, as it will make the easiness of this poem go down smoother...

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on April 7, 2012

I think i would like to stuff a few messages in a bottle...easier than a ship.....but, your poems message is far more interesting. enjoyed!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 7, 2012

'Message for a Bottle' Just stuffing it in there is a good relief at times to take off some weight of the mind..this is deep and emotional. I can see those dolphins playing~

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on April 7, 2012

An excellent poem so heartfelt and meaningful (Have A Happy Easter) Laura

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 7, 2012

a message in a bottle one would hope to stumble upon and be inspired by ...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on April 7, 2012

Love this self-introspection, whether for real or made up make not one whit of difference, Vivian. It is the grit within the lines that lend hope and eventual salvation to this lonely person. You struck a good chord with me here.