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Itsy Bitsy Spider
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Life's roads too many legs beckon proceed at your own risk engaging unforgiving love making for black widows short lived the ecstasy poisoning her beauty suspended in emotional bliss within entangled vile web cunning with her deceptive laughter Solid the white line not the one with spaces where a black widow may dwell spinning her web of silk deceit for your soul to take Ever will be black and white manifestations hint of red taking on meaning warning to stop literally for your life's culmination to fruition by endurance to make it "The itsy bitsy spider crawled up the water spout. Down came the rain, and washed the spider out. Out came the sun, and dried up all the rain, and the itsy bitsy spider went up the spout again." Beware webs of lust siphoning away desires as too lovely the widow will make of your black (c) Itsy Bitsy Spider 10May2010 Vivian L Dawson

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Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on May 19, 2012

A good reason to avoid hourglass figures. Patrick

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on May 13, 2012

What a creative spirit you have! Fabulous blending of two worlds!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 12, 2012

I love that little spider nursery rhyme. Makes for some great hip-hop too. I never knew a black widow I didn't like. But then I never knew a black widow, thank goodness.

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 12, 2012

the spiderette will always prevail ... well penned, Vivian ,,

Reviewed by Janna Hill

Reviewed on May 11, 2012

Well expressed Vivian. A spider's simplicity and our complexity are not so different.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 11, 2012

Unique in expression, captivating poem you have woven..the ending ties it all together~
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on May 11, 2012

i love the blend of the serious and the childlike,
very effective writing, Vivian, and impactful...
and as ever with you, genuinely worthwhile

john

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on May 11, 2012

Vivian,
No male of any species is ever in control, nor does he understand trully. excellent rendition.
Budd

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on May 11, 2012

Cunning and intrigue in this web of verse.
Excellent perceptive write Lady Vivian.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on May 11, 2012

Truly a fascinating and very interesting write well done indeed Laura

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2012

I sure hope it was worth it for all those little male spiders that got eaten afterwards. Just goes to show how weak men are; note to self; beware of predatory females. Are you mocking our folly, Poetess?

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on May 11, 2012

A warning well penned Vivian.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 11, 2012

Intense.....
fee

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on May 11, 2012

You called this one right, Vivian. Black Widows are a cruel and venomous creature, with the allure to beckon unwary males into her web of deceitful intrigue.

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