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Repondez s il vous plait
by Vivian L Dawson → (All Poetry by Vivian L Dawson)
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By invitation only
harmony and rhythm
rendering of my heart
beat shared barefoot
upon a beach relating
"I Love You"

Nothing ventured
nothing gained for
two when love sings
in a buoyant sea of
I love you's

Ripple out my bottle
I cast for You...please
RSVP...indulge my
fantasy, come back little
Sheba and be mine

(c) Repondez s il vous plait
07July2012
Vivian L Dawson

 

 

 

 

 

 
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 Reviews of "Repondez s il vous plait"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on August 18, 2012
Just as we cast our pleas across "le Mer" we have duplicated this same when we search out a suitable star under the endless canopy of a beautiful night sky.
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2012
I imagine the chances of a message in a bottle getting a response from the intended recipient are pretty remote but what a romantic idea. It is said that this type of message has been around for two thousand years; a tribute to the enduring fascination with the idea. Your little poem does justice to this eternal theme.
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on July 11, 2012
Sweet love rendered by the sea. A loving piece Lady Vivian.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on July 10, 2012
Vivian,
simply romance at its best written
Budd
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
Reviewed on July 10, 2012
cute!
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2012
Beautifully romantic, 2 lovers that were once 1.

Deborah
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2012
"...come back little/Sheba and be mine" That is deliciously playful! ~~ DIana
Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on July 10, 2012
Lovely poetry indeed Laura
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
Reviewed on July 10, 2012
Place within the bottle the notes of love and cast it out to sea, for at unexpected moments he returns to thee...

What a lovely vision of once was and it awaits for the return thereof

Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 10, 2012
Mysterious lines that hint at lost loves and longing...well done.
fee
Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2012
:)beautiful...MSG does reaches....best wishes
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 9, 2012
It's always a good thing when someone reciprocates our feelings and desires. I love the message in the bottle idea that Jerry put in his review.

Lovely work as always, Miss Vivian

Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2012
LOVELY, WONDER WHO YOU WERE THING OF ??? LOLHG
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 9, 2012
Aww, message plain and clear in a bottle for the lover expectant. Yes, yes, answer the plea, do it quickly.
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