20/20 in Flight (poem) by Vivian L Dawson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

One of natures most beautiful and delicate creations. wonderfully writen.

Stay well and keep writing
Eddy

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2012

I think it was Nietzsche who said, "We should try to stay as close to the flowers, the grass, and the butterflies as a child is who is no bigger than they are." This little gem seems to show that the writer has managed to retain that sense of wonder.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 3, 2012

Everytime I see a butterfly it inspires me to think of freedom. Beautifully penned, Vivian.

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2012

Beautiful.... And ummm...for what Carol says, amazing ! Liked it, best wishes, neerja

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on July 31, 2012

Butterflies are beautiful little souls Vivian :) They also touch you when you think of a loved one who has crossed over to the other side when you are missing them.

Lovely poem

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 30, 2012

Your words are thought-inciting, Vivian. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on July 30, 2012

Lady Vivian~
Shades of magenta brilliance.
The heart of a butterfly's movement
in freedom. Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 29, 2012

Oh my such breathtaking poetry. You know how to move me
Much peace love and light
Amber

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on July 29, 2012

Beautifully written Laura

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2012

And Vivian, butterflies are fasinating, like the many miles they fly every year...Enjoyed.

Deborah

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on July 29, 2012

nice flight Viv! enjoyed the ride :)

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2012

Intriguing title, alluding to perfect sight, which zooms in for the closeness of dew drops, the lift of 'heightened shades of magenta' to the fall into consciousness. This read for me like a swish of language that was delicate and dimensional. Very much enjoyed this reading experience, Vivian. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 29, 2012

Love to see them fly while walking in the wood,
just keep them away from the road as on a car hood,
they don't look anymore good...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 29, 2012

O, that the butterfly could take us there� ascending to the mountain top!

Ron

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2012

...ah yes, life is but a passing stage... as this deft delivery from form informs... we await delivery from this consciousness... into what will yet be revealed... perfect metaphor her, perfectly expressed...

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2012

VIVIAN, ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF POETRY OF MY FAVORITE THE BUTTERLY. EVERY WORD..WRITTEN WITH DEPTH AND BEAUTY. ANNA

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on July 29, 2012

Vivian this was a magnificent vision penned perfectly
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on July 29, 2012

Took us for a magnificent ride-a-long with the stunning butterfly, giving us a wonderful flight of absolute fancy and magic. Yesss!!