Upon Awakening (poem) by Vivian L Dawson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 12, 2012

Also as "old" or "young" as you are is as many times that you have traveled around the sun. A fun piece to read John. a pleasure.

Oh yes, deal me in.

dan

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on August 9, 2012

I'm in!!!!

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on August 9, 2012

Truly a Sweet poem Laura

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 9, 2012

The kid in me is always trying to bust out, but my nasty wife often quickly shoos him right back inside and tells me to get to work!

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 8, 2012

yes, Vivian, let's free our children together -
wouldn't that be something!
enjoyed your dry humour and keen observation here
and that meaningful philosophical bent you have

john

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)

Reviewed on August 8, 2012

Never knew that thing about the sun, nice to know. I work with kids and can't help noticing how much more they laugh than adults, how come we lose that great gift of happiness so easily. Maybe the inner child needs to get out more. Made me think.

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2012

...another day, another 365 gone by... Can,t see the sun for all the clouds and thunder and rain here, but my thoughts and prayers are with you. I thought this was a unique as a birthday poem as I have ever read...

Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2012

SO VERY, VERY SWEET AND WELL DONE============= LOL HG

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 7, 2012

Very lovely poetry, Another fine job my dear.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on August 7, 2012

our child within is always ready to come out and play..happy solar return
budd

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2012

hi vivian, another lovely poem..i am most certainly giving you permission to free your child within...after all she needs to celebrate and have fun...hug your way, anna

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on August 7, 2012

We should always look to the child within us, it is the carefree part of our soul. Happy birthday Vivian Dawson :) Celebrate the wonderful person you are! Chores will wait lol

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on August 7, 2012

Lady Vivian ~
The child within me will be happy to join you today.
A special day to celebrate.. "Happy Birthday" Lady Vivian.
May the sun be in-line with you always.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on August 7, 2012

My child within turned out to be an evil imp, Vivian, so maybe you'd better not invite him. Hahah

Didn't know that about the sun, some more word power to fall back on when the conversation begins to lag.

Have fun with the child within party, I'm looking on, my grumpy old guy within won't let me attend.