For my breath comes soft
wings now your gliding in my
head the height of bliss
where you do fly
Coming into my consciousness
for an affirmation growing
to be freely drifting in the
paradise you have so feathered
for me east of sun and west of
the moon
(c) Prescience
31August2012
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2012
I like that image of a paradise feathered for you, pretty unique but so descriptive at the same time. this has a pleasant, dreamy feel to it.
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2012
Magical effect in verse. Last three lines are ringing with flare. ~~ Diana
Beautiful, descriptive words wrapped up in glimpses and feelings of paradise. Your words and the photo you selected all lead up to words of poetic excellence. This is a truly lovely poem; well done, Vivian.
Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2012
sunlight and shadow suffused in a coalescence of sound and sense... marvelously dense and compact for one so light on her feet...
rare and radiant... and titled with my favorite word, too.... what more could a poet/reader ask for in a poem... dear Vivian?
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Joy L. Hale
rare and radiant... and titled with my favorite word, too.... what more could a poet/reader ask for in a poem... dear Vivian?
Roger
Enjoyed...
Deborah
One to hold close :)
Love and Light
Lily
Ron
Lovely alluring softness drifting in the paradise.
Love the feathered image.
Lady Mary Ann