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Sun of the Moon
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Sun of the Moon 

Fly me Autumn of
the moon before
a daunting season
of Winter begins..

For a luminescence
permeating the changing
colors of my mind
eliminating hibernation..

As my only love and I
stroll hand in hand
under a lamppost meant
for us to find..

Framing our place in the
Universe as the sun shines
within expressive full moon 

directing light to shine 
ahead for each other's

unending paths towards
happiness

(c) Sun of the Moon
09September2012
Vivian L Dawson

 


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 Reviews of "Sun of the Moon"
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2012
Vor der Kaserne,Vor dem grossen Tor,Stand eine Laterne,
Underneath the lantern, By the barrack gate,
Your theme was popular with both German and Allied soldiers during WW2. Your poem has the same poignancy as the song. I'm sure the old warriors would approve.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on September 13, 2012
Peacful Beauty~

Reviewed by George Dominguez
Reviewed on September 12, 2012
What a beautiful full moon where a lamppost seem to be amongs the tree ready to bring the coolness of the night. Brillant and impressive of how you penned this one beautiful picture with you lovely words of poetry from the heart. THE WISE OLD OWL

Reviewed on September 11, 2012
dreamy.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2012
"Fly me Autumn..." what a grand three words to begin this piece. Especially prominent for me are "eliminating hibernation.." and "...our place in the/Universe" (I enjoyed being reminded that we have a 'place' in the Universe) and "...full moon/directing light" reminding us that the moon reflects the sun, rounding us back to your title, "Sun of the Moon." Very satisfying. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on September 11, 2012
Beautifully written poetry indeed Laura

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 10, 2012
Beautiful writing....
fee

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 10, 2012
ah walking in the moonlight ahhhh
budd

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on September 10, 2012
VERY NICE!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 10, 2012
There is nothing like a moonlit walk with the one you love for the cold chill of winter breathes down your neck.

Ron

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on September 10, 2012
Such a lovely, soft spoken tale of the wonder of autumn and your only love and you enjoying the seasons moonlight under a special lamp post for two. A dynamite picture to set the complete mood of your words spoken so eloquently.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2012
HI VIVIAN , REMINDS ME OF THE SONG THE SILVERY MOON. NOTHING LIKE WALKING WHILE A FULL MOON IS SHINING. THANKS AGAIN FOR WONDERFUL WORDS...ANNA

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on September 10, 2012
Lady Vivian ~
Beauty of colour, under the lamp post, unending
paths towards happiness. Spellbound in this
sweet rendering song of the season.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 10, 2012
You give us much to see and contemplate, Vivian. The autumn of our thoughts are contained within the verses of this splendid poetry.

"under a lamppost meant
for us to find."

That is the ultimate guarantee, things out there that we are supposed to find. Excellent.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2012
Visions of contentment and love, Enjoyed, Vivian...

Deborah

Reviewed on September 10, 2012
What a beautiful vision Vivian :)
"Framing our place in the
Universe as the sun shines"

Just an absolutely beautiful picture of two

Love and Light
Lily


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