I am called the weeping willow
allow your spirits to be set free
from my stigma reaping your
heart to beat comfort and joy
for health and wellness
weeping no more tears to fill
my river from which there is
no return
(c) Clouding up Sunshine
07October2012
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviews of "Clouding up Sunshine"
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2012
Your poem continues the classical treatment of the weeping willow. I can think of three or four classical poets who have used this type of imagery. You are in good company.
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2012
soft, beautiful words...embracing the beautiful willow tree. anna
This tree was used over the ages
medicinally and the first one
derived for its salicine later
manufactured into acetyl salicylic acid
known as aspirin :)
In Ireland The Pussy Willow is know as one of “the seven noble trees of the land” and was honored for its multi uses from basket weaving to thatching spars and wattles including many others.
You honor the willow in your prose
Lovely Lady Vivian
Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2012
I like the "....river from which there is no return" Neat echo note on which to leave this one. ~~ Diana
Powerful words to illustrate the moods and tempo of one who is a "weeping willow." You drew me into a vortex of understanding with your words of caring. Unusual, thought provoking and very good!
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
medicinally and the first one
derived for its salicine later
manufactured into acetyl salicylic acid
known as aspirin :)
In Ireland The Pussy Willow is know as one of “the seven noble trees of the land” and was honored for its multi uses from basket weaving to thatching spars and wattles including many others.
You honor the willow in your prose
Lovely Lady Vivian
Love and Light
Lily
Blessings, xo
Christine
Roger
Joy L. Hale
Ron
budd
Lovely weeping willow tree you are a blessing.
Lady Mary Ann
Thanks for the memory, Vivian.
Deborah
Debbie
Regis