Affirmations by a Rainy Day (poem) by Vivian L Dawson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 12, 2012

rainy days were meant for lovers
to run to walk to gaze
to get dripping wet
and then to kiss.
what compares to this?

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2012

You have got me humming that song from Carousel that goes something like "When you walk thru the storm, hold your head up high," same sentiment, different treatment. Like the idea of a true love with a towel.

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on October 20, 2012

How beautiful to describe
between two and lovely affirmations
using rain as the gentleness of love

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2012

makes me sing ole lonssome me--------lol hg

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2012

I guess the rain can draw all kinds of thoughts...Vivian.

Deborah

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 14, 2012

up north I used to love walikng in the rain
but where I am located not, its not a good idea
enjoyed reading your thoughts
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Janna Hill

Reviewed on October 14, 2012

"A path filled with too much rain falling on deft ears..turn around
girl.." Those first words stick in my head like thick honey.
Beautiful Miss Vivian.
:) Janna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 14, 2012

Powerful affirmations indeed.

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2012

a wonderful write, vivian..how often we can really feel our emotions walking in the rain. keep going, anna

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on October 13, 2012

Such beautifully crafted wise truth in this one!
Blessings, xo
Christine

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on October 13, 2012

An excellent write my friend Laura

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on October 13, 2012

Lady Vivian,
Emotions on a rainy day sunshine.
Not to walk alone again in the rain.
That special someone to hold the umbrella
and walk with you. Sweet write.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on October 13, 2012

Every so often Ron comes up with something not smartassed, and this is one of those times.

You grabbed me when you wrote, "towel dry you comforting / your source of concerns"

I absolutely love your little vignettes of daily life and love and yes, Ron, tears.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 13, 2012

Only to hide tears�

Ron