I like your picture by the way, transparency is the best way to be with the one you love. The best expression ever; When you assume you make and ass out of you and me both. great poem. ~ Morgan
Kindest regards to your comment, Roger, on this poem...I hope that
I have made it more real by adding
a comma...Always respecting reviews where Love abounds, Vivian
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2012
mezmerisingularity suffuses this miracle of rare concision... (but I have not often seen much effort expended in repose)... Alliterative fool that I am, I probably would have written: "rare and radiant repose refracting..." Then again, that much of a good thing, might just be overdoing it just a touch...
Best to leave it as it is, a rare delight, dear Vivian.
Roger
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2012
If only true love had a hallmark we would have such a simple life. I think the term has been around for quite a while and this little piece certainly exhibits quality.It's short and to the point. Economy is a great virtue.
Love is a treasure; some people do not know how to love. I appreciate the sentiments you have shared through your verses here, Vivian. Love and best wishes,
It is very meaningful
and wonderful when you
have the soul who is meant
to be in your life... you
share this so well with a lot
of depth in so few words Lady Vivian
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I have made it more real by adding
a comma...Always respecting reviews where Love abounds, Vivian
Best to leave it as it is, a rare delight, dear Vivian.
Roger
Blessings,
Christine
Regis
and wonderful when you
have the soul who is meant
to be in your life... you
share this so well with a lot
of depth in so few words Lady Vivian
Love and Light
Lily
Loving your poem and beautiful image to love's endearing words.
Love your photo !!
Lady Mary Ann
budd
Eye to eye contact
Blissfully aware
Of the reflection of love