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Arrival
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         ~Arrival~

Wrought emotions seemingly larger
than life when your vehicle is out
of sync to arrive at a sunrise on time

To learn one foot in front of the other
to get to the sunset you can only travel
that path after you have become the path

(c) Arrival
21March2013
Vivian L Dawson

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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2013
It is better to travel than to arrive they say, probably because those expectations about the sunrise are not quite fulfilled.

Reviewed on March 23, 2013
When you are out of balance (out of sync), everything
is... One must become in balance (in sync) to become
the path :)

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2013
My favorite stanzas "to get to the sunset you can only travel
that path after you have become the path" These two lines are the
thesis of your poem---after you have lived life and gained insight.
So much wisdom in few words!

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 23, 2013
it starts as human struggle, shifts to 'baby steps'
but then shifts gear impressively
to a Zen understanding and declaration;
once again, fine thinking, Vivian

john

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 23, 2013
Quite thought provoking, Vivian.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 22, 2013
I try not to miss the most important times in my life. “… When your vehicle is out of sync," suggests a missed connection.

Ron

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2013
ANOTHER WONDERFUL POEM...TOO MANY ARE IN HASTE AND NEVER PUT ONE FOOT IN FRONT OF THE OTHER.. YOU KNOW THE SAYING "HASTE MAKES WASTE"...THANKS ANNA

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on March 22, 2013
~Lady Vivian~
To become the path seemingly as you write one foot in front
of the other. The sunset doesn't wait. I'd love to wiggle
my toes in sand!!

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 22, 2013
That is such a simple, but often misunderstood path, Vivian, and that is why getting to the sunset can be very difficult.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 22, 2013
yes so very true and how many never know how to put one foot in front of the other
budd


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