Cause to sway to and fro
upon a swing not to be imposing
sitting a spell just to feel
impressive portal veins flowing
sensing paths to new beginnings
Gateways of expanded awareness
letting go of past and present
travelling different dimensions
illusions of time arrived or pending
morning after merits a look anyhow
(c) Should that Morning After Be
02July2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2013
Obviously one of the other mornings after, many of mine were painful.
The early morning reflection on the events of the previous night are well captured here. May they all be gateways.
As long as it's not a hangover, there should always be a morning after. He states
Ron
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2013
So much depends upon the night before, and whether it is benign or that elusive ten! I like the changes in context implied by this deft design, whether 'before', 'benign', or bereft of all that came before benign turned to ten and then to tensile... and if all of this makes sense without being too intense, then it was an affirmation: this reader votes in favour of the morning after laughter that must curtail the night before in days of yore when all God's creatures yell for more in yellowing pages of forgotten lore!
Yes, I guess, didn't she look nice in her Sunday dress.
As for that morning after, yes indeed. If you are venturing into those different dimensions, you betcha. Loved how you approached the integrity of the poem by setting yourself into that swing, and no, I doubt you were imposing at all.
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
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The early morning reflection on the events of the previous night are well captured here. May they all be gateways.
Beautiful image that plays the sway to and fro of thoughts.
Lady Mary Ann
you take us into the moonlight...
Moonspun Visions & Love
Vickie
Love & Peace be with you
William
The before guarantees us a place in memories to be cherished, always.
Always,
Deborah
Cheers,
Dan
Ron
Please ma'am can I have some more.
Roger
As for that morning after, yes indeed. If you are venturing into those different dimensions, you betcha. Loved how you approached the integrity of the poem by setting yourself into that swing, and no, I doubt you were imposing at all.