If I could (Challenge by Mizzlady) (poem) by Tina M Clark on AuthorsDen

If I could (Challenge by Mizzlady)
by Tina M Clark → (All Poetry by Tina M Clark)
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If I could I would turn back the sands of time relive a period of my life just one more time I would keep each of my children but replace the painful years with their father that I spent If I could I would choose someone that would love me true never leave me hurting broken and blue If I could I would return to that day just before your said those words I would blow away those words like smoke in the wind and hear them from someone who knew how to love and cherish and meant them If I could I would wrap all my love within a rose petal bless it with a kiss and start that part of my life over again If I Could I would say the words I DO and know that when they were repeated that our Love would never end That I would carry your love with me till the very end If I could I would be with you this very second never would I leave I would wrap you within a heart so full of love and embrace you till the angels called us from heaven above If I could �2005 Tina Clark

Reviewed by White Dove left (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2005

Oh, this is so precious..thanks

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on October 18, 2005

poignant read

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 17, 2005

beautiful poem!

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Tina, absoluetly Beautiful!!!!!
Love it and you are one of my favorites as well!
Write on !!
Exceptional of real love should never die!
Peeace and real happiness to you!
Rich Criso

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Sadness creates. You have done it here, Tina. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

A truly heartfelt piece, Tina.

Reviewed by Betty Torain (Reader)

Beautiful POEM! Is is emotionally healthy to reminisce. I don't hear regret in this write. Thank you keep writing, Love Betty

Reviewed by George Carroll

Sad and wiser but oh if we could only erase those sad memories.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2005

Nicely done, Tina. Sad, but flows beautifully.
One can't live on regrets; regrets are nothing more than a broken crutch that keeps you from the good stuff waiting in the wings...to give you wings. They are all lessons to be learned. Well done, I enjoyed reading.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Regrets I've had a few, but then again... IF I COULD. I would score
Englands winner in the world cup finals. Only had that dream since
I was five. To think some blokes don't grow up..
But. We can't turn back the clock, yet we can rewind it...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Most touching read!!

Something special in my article section to listen too!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ken Bass (Reader)

Very descriptive and heartfelt honey. I too wish I could turn back the hands of time and have met you 25 years ago. As you know though we have from this time on forever and a day to have love and laughter and for you to never cry for anything but a happy tear for our love. All my love to you from your OUTLAW.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

We always wonder "If I could, then what would I have done differently"; you have written it so well.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

wow!!!

excellent write.

heart felt, tender ... honest.

well said. well versed.

TX