the colors of fall embraces the horizon; delicate petals rush to hide their sweets; cold and blue, waves gently fold upon the seashore in a blessing of fate, two spirits meet.
as darkness wraps itself blind around my fingers, trees bare themselves naked in winter haze. the tides in retreat reveal more than expected; thoughts last more than his momentary gaze.
the dawn shimmers sunrise in sleepless hope and faith while greens sway in soft sunlit reverie; dance and crash. inevitably, the moon directs: she does as waterfalls - beautifully.
mild afterglow skies reminiscent of your face, the lonely world yields to flames - so do i. oceans ablaze, what miracles can spark from this? believe that even hearts can be on fire.
for an amazing person - you are loved much. thanks for the incredibly wonderful weekend. i still can't believe you were here.
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Reviews of "sunset"
Reviewed by Jason Chang (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2006
Your detailed imagery is very sensual in this poem. I love it because it is as if passion itself wrote the poem.Very good Jenn keep them coming.=)
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2005
This has some wonderful images and almost reads like a story. Good work.
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