loneliness has gripped me; it has left me bereft and cold. i dream of blue mountains and endless space to stare at and feel a belonging of some sort. i am only a shadow here on earth, a shadow beneath someone's love: the last choice, a replacement of the best he'd never have but always known.
so tell me, do you know how that feels?
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Reviews of "tell me"
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2004
So starkly beautiful and emotive.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2004
it is a lonely place in realization.
Excellent write.
Excellent write.