round the room rickety tables full of pungent drinks people to drunk to move slouched down over chairs slow sultry low down dirty juke joint dancing music plays smoke fills the air and moves to ceiling fans oscillation currents couples fill the dance floor, arms wrapping each other grinding tight you can hear the movement of feet slow dragging in the saw dust the whine of the guitar on stage vibrates in their inner souls no whites of eyes shine in the dark, for all eyes are the are closed the whole room shifts as the horn player takes it's raunchy solo heads lift from shoulders up right, as if awaking from a trance fingers lock tighter, they all start to rock slow and easy in time you see women lift to their toes as the notes climb high men seem to be holding them down if only by shear will to the room then they start to fly too, as the women pull them in the bluesy air feet lift in time to the beat, and the juke joint pulsates heat one would think this OLE joint's walls would cave in from the sonic sounds of stage and pounding on dance floor but stand it does, as it always has to this rheumatic down home flow
Wonderful "then they start to fly too, as the women pull them in the bluesy air
feet lift in time to the beat, and the juke joint pulsates heat
one would think this OLE joint's walls would cave in
from the sonic sounds of stage and pounding on dance floor
but stand it does, as it always has to this rheumatic down home flow"
missed your poetry
Lady peg
Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
I love Juke Joints like this.....great work.....BUT the formatting and spacing with the piece centered leaves some ackward unnatural breaks. It takes away from this fine work
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Ah, in a way that causes me to think of Shelly's Mann Hole in Hollywood, doubt if it is still there, it was where the "players" came after hours to jam.
David Hightower’s lyrically expansive meditation on the whims of fate and the unpredictability of the human condition fill the pages of THE HANGING MAN DREAMS with thrilling music and mesmerizing imagery. Hightower’s richly infused voice echoes the e
This work reminds me of some of the venues i have played at.
Robin
Reindeer
feet lift in time to the beat, and the juke joint pulsates heat
one would think this OLE joint's walls would cave in
from the sonic sounds of stage and pounding on dance floor
but stand it does, as it always has to this rheumatic down home flow"
missed your poetry
Lady peg